Tuesday, January 27, 2009

The Silver Lining

Above and beyond the cloudy gaze
of a grey sky
the inverted columns of sunlight flash off
back into the upper reaches of the atmosphere
as i sit here
thinking of you
attributing the origin of
all the light in the world
to your face
attributing the shifting breeze
weaving through the street
so gentle,
just before the first drizzle,
to your grace
attibuting the light rain
and the sigh of relief of the hot tar road
to your easing
of my pain
Attributing the rain
now pourng forth
to your love and understanding
of my pitted soul.
The flash of lightning
and the thunder heard,
the music of our lives
two wild birds
who dare to float up there,
away from the world
and it's mundane dust,
amidst the angry purple clouds
that rumble in dark blood lust.


for someone special

9 Comments:

Anonymous said...

velly velly naaiiice. :)
i like your style, man.

Anonymous said...

wow deffa machan! seems like someone's in luurve!!

celebrate?

TheWhacksteR said...

Black - Thank you kindly :)

Unsilent - love? haha! far from it bro. just an impulse..but lets celebrate anyways and i'll tell you all about what inspired it :D

Sabby said...

Awwww it's sweet.
Echoing Unsilent, are you in lurrrrrveeeeeeee?! =D Since its for some special and all?!

Either way, very well written.
The lot of you are a bunch of poets, isn't it?! =)

Lady divine said...

wow! nice!! now lets hear the story behind it..:)

Makuluwo said...

Lucky person, whoever it is. ;)

TheWhacksteR said...

Ah haha.. well its one of those escalating fantasies. Just an expression of a moment, when you let your imagination run wild on possibility, even if it will all just turn out to be a dream in the end. Just felt like capturing that. GAH! *attempts to go back to non-soppy/ dreamy artiste mode*

And Sab - a lot of us are i guess. you should try it more :)

LD - i hope you got an answer

Maku - you think so? hyok hyok ;)

Sachi said...

ah. the momentary silver lining. nice :)

Anonymous said...

IT ROLLS OF SO MUCH OF EMOTION,ITS NOT LOVE THOUGH ITS MUCH MORE...LUCKY SUM ONE!