Wednesday, December 24, 2008

when i was five

she held my hand
she moved it down
she let it go
and held me there
as she knelt down
I caressed her hair
as she set to work
and i began to frown
with the efffort of
not breaking down.
then she finished
and i was happy.
now i'm grown up though
and i can tie my own.

5 Comments:

Dee said...

sweet :)

Anonymous said...

Uh dude...for a moment there, I woz terrified :)

Dilly said...

haha... ur a cheeky piece of work aren't you. ;D

Sachi said...

u! U!! was horrified at first !! :P

Scrumps said...

Dude! Do not do that to me! Clearly I need to be a bit more optimistic in my thoughts! :S