A green little bottle, the cork is screwed on tight. The genie inside might not or might, be waiting to tell you a story of light, a story of darkness, with thunder and flashes of white.
Three wishes my child do not ask for more. Your life can be changed for now and evermore. And for the rest of eternity you will reside, in peace and in riches, i do not lie.
Contemplating the wisdom of the attempt to be made, the mind is taken on a journey of hope, a thrillseeker, the thrills are here to take.
But there is always and will be a price to be paid.
It is the bite of the darkside, the deal is your soul. Live in the light my child all mighty and bold, at the end of your time, the secrets will be told.
And then the darkness will swallow you whole.
Throw the wretched bottle back into the sea, the temptation is there but it is not for me. Destroy it I must yet so should it be? but its too late, the bottle is already out of reach.
If you see it, destroy it.
That was a public service announcement :-)
Friday, July 18, 2008
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"Contemplating the wisdom of the attempt to be made, the mind is taken on a journey of hope, a thrillseeker, the thrills are here to take" that line could a little work
hehe
good stuff dude
hmm..nice one..its a real hard decision to make if faced with.nyway this poem remined me of this Alice Cooper song..heh
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KmeYOHmhxAk
that sure was good....
but sometimes you tend to hold the bottle too tight and not throw it...:(
good one though...
Your writing skills are being unveiled at quite a pace and it's just getting better...:)
oh no...im doomed!.. ;) i like :)
Really reminds me of that excellent Twilight Zone episode called 'Button, Button'.
If you haven't seen it, you definitely should.
oh i want to open the bottle :) good work . really good.
St Fallen - Thanks for the feedback! i think your stuff is pretty great btw.
Realskullzero - Alice Cooper rocks! love that song.
Lady Divine - Yeah the root of evil is the temptation afterall isnt it? both of us seem to have gone on a similar tangent! thanx for the kudos.
Dee Cee - Thanx! hey whens that strawberry date coming along ha? keep away from the bottle.
Foxhound - not really into Twilight Zone that much, i'll check it out though thanx for the lead..
Middle Child - lol someone always opens it i suppose, Thanks. cheers!
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